a change a little better than when he was before a robot type protagonist who only followed the same steps to get stronger xD. -It would be better if there was a Pov of the sister, to know what she is doing and the protagonist socializing with more people (of course she has to be strong and a girl xD, since with her personality she would not pay attention to anyone ). - It would also be good for you to learn more defense and detection techniques, to strengthen your body so that when by chance it runs out of its powers (it would not be vulnerable, it would be like a saitama that solves everything with fists, or as a "one piece" that has weapons haki or dxd who can use toki to strengthen his body (like a certain demon that uses regulus xD)).
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