Review Detail of Soun_Phavin in Jacob Mornings

The world and the synopsis are interesting. I admit that. I've started reading the first chapter and it gives a lot of information in one chapter, it seems confusing and so hard to remember all of the character's names. The grammar and vocabulary are great but the writing needs to be in more detail for the reader to read easier. (Sorry saying this to you when my writing is worse than you, it's my honest opinion as a reader) But one most important thing, yes!! The plot is great and unique. Keep it up and give me more updates, author!!