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Davros92
Davros92Lv53yr
2021-07-01 09:55

To be fair I understand that enumerating in value helps in understanding and saves effort in the narrative, but let's review: the writer puts the MC at the point of invading the dreams of others. And the best he can create on top of that are points to buy items? There is a whole mystical world to explore. Or you can go to science fiction and develop a dream comparison and use that to create marketing. Or something new: the MC can simply help other people for free, after all there are people, volunteers for a better world or start helping the family and then interact with more people with other problems. Sometimes these texts are so generic and seem like a forced catharsis. There are people in the world besides the MC and it should be the author's job to develop that. Well, if the MC suffers from cold, hunger or violence, is it because other thousands or millions suffer the same and what is the answer to improve that? Hit someone arrogant and run away.

I Can Infiltrate the Dreams of Others!

Huanhuan21
3.3
40 Chs

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NwithoneN
NwithoneNLv2

Lol.

3yr
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twice_OT9
twice_OT9Lv13

same thoughts bro, you have my respect

3yr
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Hnn17
Hnn17Lv6

ccp limits their imagination

3yr
3
Supreme_Devil
Supreme_DevilLv4

It just doesn't stop at limiting it, it's killing it, without it masterpieces like Reverend Insanity and lord of mysteries wouldn't be so few

Hnn17:ccp limits their imagination
3yr
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shubh_gupta
shubh_guptaLv2

Ngl, helping others and going towards world peace is not something I want from a novel. But I definitely agree that infiltrating dreams can have such huge potential, yet the author decided to waste it on a system... Maybe live their dreams to gain experience with their skills? Prolly be more empathetic to their situation too because you understand how they feel? But naah, Imma go the easy path and go for a badly designed system. Why badly designed you ask? In the synopsis, MC uses 1000 points for a high level lucky draw and 1000 points for a simple lucky draw...

3yr
4
MyriadChanges303
MyriadChanges303Lv4

try soul of negary, its basically lotm if klein was evil

Supreme_Devil:It just doesn't stop at limiting it, it's killing it, without it masterpieces like Reverend Insanity and lord of mysteries wouldn't be so few
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