This could have been perfect, if not for the fourth wall break(s) the author keeps tossing out. I find the mc interactions and reactions funnier than the supposed "comedy" brought my the fourth wall. Sigh, when the supposed "comedy" appeared first, I debated if I should drop it or not, but thinking this is a really good story I powered through it and read more. Now with another "comedy" attempt, I'm back to square one of debating if I should drop it or not. Curse you author for making something so good and bad at the same time. (Personal opinion others may like this)
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LIKEIdk why, but many readers saying that the book is comedic though that is not my intention... Even in my other book, many are saying that it's a comedy genre... But I didn't even think that way... Well, It's your choice if you want to continue reading or drop the book. But I appreciate if you continue. Thanks for the review, btw.
Thanks for that reply, I understand my book well because of it. (Actually, I don't read my book)... Information or words keeps popping out in my head once u tried to do so (Basically, it's not that I don't want to read my book, but I can't; because I always get distracted in the middle of reading) This is also the reason why I encouraging my readers to give me reviews, for me to understand my book too. Thank you, appreciated.