Review Detail of Benny_Manatee in Temptation Chronicles
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Author supporting his work, as you do. This is an updated version, I'm deleting the previous one. I promise a quite action filled series, with a lot of schemes, some politics, and a healthy dose of revenge, to top it off. I like my plot-twists, so expect them (or actually don't, that'd spoil them ;) ) I managed to win Silver Prize for WPC #194 (I actually started writing this for that). This will be updated daily, entirely based on YOUR support ;) Finally Volume 1 - The Rise of Temptation, has finally been completed, and with that, Volume 2 is starting! Thanky you so much for your support up until now, and I'm hoping that you'll continue doing so from now on as well! :D Have fun reading, B. Manatee
Temptation Chronicles
Benny_Manatee
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Sooo I'm guessing there gon be some spicy 🔥 scenes, but will there be multiple female leads/ love interest or are they just one night stands
Benny_Manatee:The Synopsis says it all ;)
I'm gonna update the synopsis, I guess lol There's nothing of that sort really planned. MC does Temptation in other ways, and usually doesn't use his powers to tempt anyone into his bed.
high_men:Sooo I'm guessing there gon be some spicy 🔥 scenes, but will there be multiple female leads/ love interest or are they just one night stands
Benny_Manatee:I'm gonna update the synopsis, I guess lol There's nothing of that sort really planned. MC does Temptation in other ways, and usually doesn't use his powers to tempt anyone into his bed.
Benny_Manatee:I'm gonna update the synopsis, I guess lol There's nothing of that sort really planned. MC does Temptation in other ways, and usually doesn't use his powers to tempt anyone into his bed.
Look, to each his own. If you don't wanna read it, don't. If you do, go for it. Saying that a story is dull, before giving it a read is kinda arrogant, or naive. Can't decide. Don't mean to be rude, just judging you based on a comment.
Shirubafokkusuhime:excuse me, Mr author but is that the only skill your character has? if that's the case then that basically just makes him an incubus... I don't know if I'll take this as an insult but that's a little dull for a story don't you think?image
look, I'm not trying to degrade your story I'm just asking out of simple curiosity if that's the only skill he has? there are times where I do like to compare notes; I really don't know how else to say it…
Benny_Manatee:Look, to each his own. If you don't wanna read it, don't. If you do, go for it. Saying that a story is dull, before giving it a read is kinda arrogant, or naive. Can't decide. Don't mean to be rude, just judging you based on a comment.
I'm not trying to start a fight either, I just tend to reply in the same style as the critique/comment/whatever. First and foremost, this is a story with superpowers. It's not that it's only about that, rather that aspect is just the means to an end. Characters have a single superpower, that they can manipulate in certain ways. I don't want to spoil anything from later on, but there's a secondary system, but that's not about having a power, rather using your own body in certain ways, according to what you're good at. In that sense, no it's not his only skill. Furthermore, most characters are quite 'creative' with how they use their abilities, thus making them a bit more colorful. But then again, that's the opinion of the author. Take that as you will. And as I said, go ahead, read it until chapter 40, it's free, and if you liked it, go ahead and read more. If you don't like it after that, you don't have to, but please do remember, that I started writing with this work. In the first 40 chapters it shows a lot how inexperienced I was, and after that, I like to think that the quality gets way better. If your problem was only with the premise, tell me, I'll try to figure out a way to make it more appealing.
Shirubafokkusuhime:look, I'm not trying to degrade your story I'm just asking out of simple curiosity if that's the only skill he has? there are times where I do like to compare notes; I really don't know how else to say it…image
Benny_Manatee:I'm not trying to start a fight either, I just tend to reply in the same style as the critique/comment/whatever. First and foremost, this is a story with superpowers. It's not that it's only about that, rather that aspect is just the means to an end. Characters have a single superpower, that they can manipulate in certain ways. I don't want to spoil anything from later on, but there's a secondary system, but that's not about having a power, rather using your own body in certain ways, according to what you're good at. In that sense, no it's not his only skill. Furthermore, most characters are quite 'creative' with how they use their abilities, thus making them a bit more colorful. But then again, that's the opinion of the author. Take that as you will. And as I said, go ahead, read it until chapter 40, it's free, and if you liked it, go ahead and read more. If you don't like it after that, you don't have to, but please do remember, that I started writing with this work. In the first 40 chapters it shows a lot how inexperienced I was, and after that, I like to think that the quality gets way better. If your problem was only with the premise, tell me, I'll try to figure out a way to make it more appealing.
hey I was wondering if there's going to be any romance because the only thing the synopsis said is he's not going to use his power to get a woman into his bed and since there's not a tag I just thought I would ask if this is a pure action no romance at all or if there will be some later either way definitely adding this to my library I've read both types so it doesn't really matter to much to me but I am a fan of the MC having a woman to help keep his head straight I've only read the first few chapters but so far so good, keep up the good work[img=recommend]
Daoist_Iveyflame:hey I was wondering if there's going to be any romance because the only thing the synopsis said is he's not going to use his power to get a woman into his bed and since there's not a tag I just thought I would ask if this is a pure action no romance at all or if there will be some later either way definitely adding this to my library I've read both types so it doesn't really matter to much to me but I am a fan of the MC having a woman to help keep his head straight I've only read the first few chapters but so far so good, keep up the good work[img=recommend]