If you keep reading, the story will continue to be interesting that cannot be understood in one or two chapters, the ahead you read, the more interesting the story will be. In many places, I found unnecessary capitalization, along with many spelling mistakes that I pointed out. But your dialogue is good. Even in many places, you have chosen the word very well. I had fun reading, keep it up.
Benny_Manatee
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LIKEThanks! I corrected them all! :D The unnecessary capitalizations, I think were because I didn't really think through the entire brackets system yet. I mean stuff like the names of [Powers] (<- like this one). At first I wasn't sure how to use these brackets, so sometimes I left them out, and sometimes I included them.
I understand that, like you used huntress in capital which is a common noun, there is no need for capitalization, yes if you want to focus on it then you can use it like this, 'Huntress' and if the common noun is in the first, then it will be capitalized.
Benny_Manatee:Thanks! I corrected them all! :D The unnecessary capitalizations, I think were because I didn't really think through the entire brackets system yet. I mean stuff like the names of [Powers] (<- like this one). At first I wasn't sure how to use these brackets, so sometimes I left them out, and sometimes I included them.
Or if you use it as someone's epithet. I'm pretty sure it was used for Meda, and in that case, it would be her epithet, which would in turn should be capitalized. But yeah, i get what you mean.
Pixiepiu:I understand that, like you used huntress in capital which is a common noun, there is no need for capitalization, yes if you want to focus on it then you can use it like this, 'Huntress' and if the common noun is in the first, then it will be capitalized.
The epithet is treated like an adjective that modifies genus name. The genus name is always capitalized and italicized (or underlined if hand-written). The specific epithet is not capitalized, even when it is based on an otherwise capitalized place name.
Benny_Manatee:Or if you use it as someone's epithet. I'm pretty sure it was used for Meda, and in that case, it would be her epithet, which would in turn should be capitalized. But yeah, i get what you mean.
Benny_Manatee:Or if you use it as someone's epithet. I'm pretty sure it was used for Meda, and in that case, it would be her epithet, which would in turn should be capitalized. But yeah, i get what you mean.
That is correct, sure, but what I'm referring to, is the way how it's primarily used in popculture. The most basic example, would be from one piece. If you take the main character, Straw Hat Luffy, than the 'Straw Hat' part is his epithet. If his name is not actually mentioned, and someone calls him Straw Hat, it shows that they're referring to him, rather than a common strawhat. That's the reason I decided to always capitalize them, to simply show that I'm not just referring to anyone, but that specific person. I mean most of my characters don't have an epithet, at least not yet. So rather than complicating it further, let's call it a sort of nickname?
Yes. All writers think differently and they present it in writing accordingly and I completely appreciate it.
Benny_Manatee:That is correct, sure, but what I'm referring to, is the way how it's primarily used in popculture. The most basic example, would be from one piece. If you take the main character, Straw Hat Luffy, than the 'Straw Hat' part is his epithet. If his name is not actually mentioned, and someone calls him Straw Hat, it shows that they're referring to him, rather than a common strawhat. That's the reason I decided to always capitalize them, to simply show that I'm not just referring to anyone, but that specific person. I mean most of my characters don't have an epithet, at least not yet. So rather than complicating it further, let's call it a sort of nickname?