Review Detail of kickyx in Ssamsu Taekkyeon in MHA (GOH)

Good idea, bad execution. Your biggest mistake was the timeskips. You pretty much time-skipped all the way to cannon and only had 1 moment that wasnt a summary of what he did in a timeskip which was when he fought a thug that for some reason wanted to provoke him when he was training in a gym.. (he's 10 btw) and then the thug thinks its a good idea to fight him.. Its really forced and unrealistic and ruins the flow entirely. Another thing, you didnt really develop anything in the story you just told us he did something. For example, you never showed any moments where he was training his martial arts you just told us he mastered it.. Another example is the personality of the mc, it wasnt developed at all, all we know is that he likes martial arts and watches anime.. Finally, this story wasnt honestly thought out becuase if he mastered his martial arts then he cant really improve anymore and itll be a constant repeat of him fighting and winning with no losses or development of character for him..