Review Detail of Spirits_everywhere in Ssamsu Taekkyeon in MHA (GOH)

Good idea, but mediocre execution. I mean, there was almost zero character development for the mc except knowing that he likes martial arts. I'm no professional writer, but I believe a good foundation for a story always depends on details. If you want the character to develop, then you should start making his personality flawed in some way. If you want to focus on developing his abilities instead, you should start by making his character stable. I have no idea which one you are planning to do, and if continue just forcing your way to the plot, it would not end up very enjoyable to read. Except maybe those readers who likes nothing but the canon plot, that is. Plus, a character is usually formed during your childhood. If you said you want to improve Bakugo's personality and character, you should start with showcasing the interactions between Bakugo and mc during their childhood and not during the start of canon because if you're doing it your way when the two of them are friends before canon, you are just basically forcing your way to canon plot, which stated above, it's boring. Your title contains the name of a martial arts, but there were basically zero development in martial arts. It's like chapter one: "Wow, I love martial arts, especially Ssam-Su Taekkyeon. *dies* *reborn with wishes*" And then chapter three: "Yay, I fully mastered Ssam-Su Taekkyeon" with like zero development. So unless you are planning on completely decapitating canon, a bland character with bland/repeated plot would not be interesting to read.