Review Detail of readtokilltime in SD: Shaggy's Legend

I've added 3 stars because it's a new idea on fanfic with scooby doo but, the grammar just really messes everything up. I mean even the catchphrase of Shaggy is all messed up, almost impossible to read the sentences. If you could have a friend or someone translate it for you then it could probably work out. Good luck author