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time to write a review. writing quality- it has excellent grammar, the spacing is just right so you can understand it better than being compacted in one paragraph, the use of words and reference are on point. story development- it's stable and understandable, no obvious plot holes but so far no main objective. character design- it's just right his personality is on point with his race and doesn't bend to others, follows his on plans just the perfect saiyan, I'll leave the judging of his love life to readers to know. so far this are the things shown in the current chapters, the other characters also has their original personality and also has good character development, the oc characters are also developing not remaining stagnant making them alive not just a character for that arc then they become stagnant and looking like an incompetent character. updating stability- it's stable to say the least even if it's 1 chapter a week it's still consistent and when the author is not going to update he gives a heads up not leaving without ghosting his/her readers. world background- so far the world background is based on the dcu canon so far no visible butterfly effects that are massive enough that can affect the timeline. keep up the good work author. also if you didn't know the author has a other finished fanfic it's also good.

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also this is my own opinion so you judge it yourself. p.s. webnovel could really use an edit for comments and reviews