So far, I think I had a blast reading the first few parts of the novel. It was very interesting and detailed. I don't know what I could suggest from what I had read. Kudos to the author!

Somehow, the first two chapters got me confusing, not gonna lie. Overall, the story of this fanfic is great that I read it so fast. I hope that you'll make each chapters longer, so each waiting time is long worth it. I'm just suggesting it. I promise that it will work more. To sum it all, the story and Loki are best. (sorry if my grammar is bad hehe.)

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The Author narrative is distracting(cutting off the story in awkward spots) BUT if that is removed, the story is well written. I like the twist on power.

I've watched a few avengers movie, so this fanfic is amazing!!! I would recommend anyone who loves avengers series. I look forward to reading more chapters.😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

here take my stonks I mean stones your story is interesting I hope you keep it up I wonder how it'll turn out I really never read that many good fanfics with loki as the protagonist 😎👍

The way of writing is so fine and it has no mistake everything is upto the mark this fanfic feels like what at fanfic really should be like the writing was understandable and easy good work author

This is a really nice fanfic. I absolutely liked it. If not for the 2nd chap which made me dizzy, I would've given it a higher rating. And personally, I don't like romance but let me see how the story goes. RECOMMENDED!.

Your main character is Loki, so when it comes to characters, you should be good. Writing is not flawless, there were some basic issues I found but it's a good read overall, and boi it doesn't feel like a fan fic