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2021-07-04 17:00

Loving this novel so far. You’ve got a daily upload schedule which is great and the quality is also great. I like the way the story has progressed and I’m glad to see the newer chapters where we learn of Loki being the true arcana. Overall this is an amazing novel and if you can increase the upload schedule please do so but if not just keep consistency and quality. Great job!

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Hello, Author here. Of course I give this five stars, I’m biased. However, After 124 chapters and finishing the first Volume of this book, I think I have a pretty good grasp on this story. If you’re not sure on whether you want to read this book, then here you go- the opinion straight from the Author himself. Get ready to read a lot though, I might accidentally rant 😅 1 - This story is a Fantasy, Action, and Comedy. This means that unlike some other yandere works, it’s not super psychological. There will be yandere moments and character development, but it’s not as psychologically deep. 2 - The MC. If you read the other reviews, you might notice that most of the bad ones have to do with the MC. Except for one review which gives one star, just says “not my cup of tea” and doesn’t explain, like seriously? Anyways, those reviews say that mc is a “beta” and “worst kind of MC” and etc. I just want to say, at the beginning the MC is annoying. That’s true. But that’s on purpose. He’s purposely written that way for his character development. And trust me, at the end of Volume 1, he is a lot different than at the beginning. So if you are reading and the only thing you dislike is the MC, then please continue on. He gets better, I promise. I will admit though his character development does take some time. 3 - A flaw in this story, at least the first Volume, is not all harem characters get appropriate development, due to me focusing on advancing the main story. Volume 2 will focus more on character development on harem members and giving them more “screen-time” so that hopefully you can grow to love them. 4 - There might be (probably are) some grammatical errors, feel free to point them out if you wish. I try to fix them when pointed out. 5 - And I’m the author so keep in mind I am biased :). Anyways, should you have read all of this and decided to read, then thank you. If you decided not to read, okay then.

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