Story would have potential if there was flavor content added. That being said the story doesn’t have the best character development.
LegalWolf
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LIKEYou are very right Seth. This story that I wrote wasn't my favorite. I spoilt the storyline and a whole lot and also planned to complete the novel with more than 100 chapters but I ended it at a 100 chapters. Thank you for the honest review Seth. You can also check out Awakening the Ancestors which is also my novel and is signed using a non-exclusive contract.