Review Detail of AscheCWPM in Douluo Dalu 1 : Fire And Lightning
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There's a few things I can say about this story but overall, I would recommend it. The grammar could use some work as the author has spelling mistakes, uses commas instead of periods, and they often use the wrong form when using gender words (uses grandson when describing a female or using him/his when talking about a female character) The rankings can also get confusing because it's not the rankings used in the novel/manhua (Spirit Saint = Soul Sect?) Story development is very copy paste in the first few chapters when the MC is training and he does get OP within those chapters but it's with DD4 in mind. Stability is great! As is story development and character design. Not much world building done yet though but I look forward to it.
Douluo Dalu 1 : Fire And Lightning
Enryu_2322
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if i can casually read the story and its somewhat good them hey I dont mind a casual mtl read they can be quite the storyies to read when bored...I like to think of mtls as homework despite English being my main and first and only language its been several years since I dropped from college so i think of them a brush up on how to train my English
Enryu_2322:Thank you for the suggestions and criticisms given. To be honest, I myself don't really understand English. All the languages used in this fanfiction script are purely using google translation and also grammely to improve the grammar. I'm sorry if it bothers you a lot for the readers.