Item: Transmigrated Mind
Rating: 4.6
Author: Omahakhan

OmahakhanLv13yr

2021-06-30 20:31

I think the mc accepted the fact that he was teleported into a completely different world rather quickly . Other then that I like the flow of the story.

Transmigrated Mind

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Okay, I really like this story. Not many transmigration stories evolve around parents who literally kick out their own son. Although I like it, I believe that this story suffers from bunching paragraphs together and telling us through dialogue. Example of this can be found in the second paragraph in the first chapter. Instead of having the Protag ask why his head hurts, why not have him feel it and pull his hand away from the pain? Also, why not write 'trying to get his barrings, he felt around and ultimately found... a brick wall?' I think what would help the author out in this is the advice of "Let us see through his eyes." I can't wait to see what's in store for our Honourable John Colton, the favorable and loved shut-in.

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It's really great!! I just started reading so I can't tell about the whole, but the starting is really good and interesting. I look forward to reading more chapters. Keep it up author! :D

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rzasrsnaLv2

The book is Interesting! i love this kind of genre. I'm not done reading it but for sure I'm going to love this novel! I also added it on my library. keep it up!

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FlamefalcoLv3

I love this book! Although The paragraph needs to be seperate So i have easier to Follow and knowing who’s in the conversation. But overall I love your work. Please keep it up I cant wait what happens soon!!

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Bird_Of_ParadiseLv4

I love the plot and flow of story. Personally I love fanatsy and transmigration kinda works so why not add this to your library as well😉😉..I mean its good but if the writer does great it will be even better😌😌Hoping to see that improvement😌😌

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Yvette_CeliaLv10

Hey, i like the story. You write it well, so it's easy for me to give you 5 star. Keep on writing cause this story will be great if continued.

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This a good read! I recommend having shorter paragraphs to make it easier to read, but other than that, it's definitely worth a read.

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