heck there might only be three chapters as of writing this but if all the other books that the great and mighty cornbringer has given us lowly peasants (and I have a feeling they are) then this novel will be glorious, also best of luck with this new novel don't want you to get over worked or anything. au revoir.

This author has given us a lot so by default, he would get the 5 stars. Good luck. -------------------------------------------------------------------

C'mon. It's Lord Cornbringer, what else did you expect? The Lord Cornbringer is known for his raven fetish and his wonderful novels, so of course, I would give 5 stars to this novel even though it only has (July 22, 2021): 3 Chapters now. Also, I expect this MC to have something Raven-related. No, I don't expect, I DEMAND!

My sexy opinion is biased, what can I say?

I hate the MC. The rest of the story is good. Writing is good knowing it is Corn. But MC is already considered an adult mentally. Combining both lives he is already close to 30. Moreover he is also an adept computer programmer so basically he can really think rationally and also being pragmatic. But what happened is that, his mentality regressed back to a child. I'm pretty sure he know the ins and outs of the Naruto series. The dark side and the light side of the animation. But what I read in the novel is that he just forgot it. He forgot how does politics works and etc. But over all, writing, update, story development and writing quality is good. Only the character design for this MC I personally don't like. PS. I'm just giving my opinion, no hate

What i don't like this fanfic are CD and SD, first about CD, what i don't like is how many bad decisions mc make and he don't think he'll not get killed in his sleep by other hidden village ninja like uzushiogakure get destroyed because of their fuinjutsu , or sakumo hatake who is suicide because Danzo don't like him, or Uchiha clan that got massacre because their eye Keith genkai or bloodline breeding done by kumogakure, or Pakura who got betrayed by her own Village because the new Kazekage feel that his throne is threatened by her, or Karin and her mother who becomes walking "band aid" in a bad way because by bitting their skin other people injury can be healed, or other people who get experiment by Orochimaru for their genetics, for f word sake mc is still weak don't revealed important information that can threatened mc life. Second is SD, feel not engaging enough for me at least. P.s. i wonder will author/author "friend" will delete this review, because i thought this fanfic there will be some 3 star review like mine or worst 1 star review with how many people don't like how mc make his many bad decisions. P.s.s i dare you remove this review author/author friend, because if you remove this you f word pathetic human being.

After reading a few chapters I wanted to give my opinion to the latest novel of our Lord CORNBRINGER. Firstly: I like the premise of the Naruto World and I also like that the story starts waay before Canon. But here comes my single complaint: I don't really like it when someone takes Powers and Skills from totally unrelated games/series and puts them in the world. In this novels case World of War craft in Naruto. At First I thought MC would just take a physical class like Rogue or Warrior and use the skills to complement the Naruto typical Ninja skills. Because that would have been super easy to blend in. But I'm not exactly sure how you could perfectly integrate magic in Naruto. Some things like lightning fire or maybe even Ice could be translated to jutsu, but even those would get suspicions of people with dojutsu like byakugan and sharingan. Cause there is no Chakra involved in magic. But then comes the even bigger question of holy magic of priests and paladins. There is no direct equivalent in naruto for those skills. Which is why I can't give this novel 5 stars. Sorry author-sama. Well Peace out ✌️

it's cornbringer👍¯\(°_o)/¯¯\(°_o)/¯¯\(°_o)/¯¯\(°_o)/¯¯\(°_o)/¯¯\(°_o)/¯¯\(°_o)/¯¯\(°_o)/¯¯\(°_o)/¯¯\(°_o)/¯¯\(°_o)/¯so definitely a five star

Decent writing quality and decent stability of updates too, at least while it lasted. The premise of the story is interesting but the execution felt way too lacking, especially if compared to the game of throne fanfic. Could've done well with the explanations of the racial traits and maybe keeping some track of what abilities the mc have. Many details are lacking as well, especially the spells. All in all, it needs more details. I also don't like how things turned out so quickly. It felt like the author is trying to pull a blitzkrieg. The novel started, then comes the prologue and a few short chapters later the mc is already in the war, killed some enemies, showed off his cards and then got noticed by the Hokage. Perhaps things could've been done in a better way. 1.8 total score by the way.