Review Detail of Jay_Corbitt_0777 in Hero of Darkness

Item: Hero of Darkness
Rating: 2

Review detail

Jay_Corbitt_0777Lv142yrJay_Corbitt_0777

It would be a decent book but the author seems to think we are paying to have him pop in and make comments or reply to the other readers. He took an entire chapter I paid fo and turned it into some revamped explanation of how the leveling and stat syste works, something he should have had figured out before he even started writing.

Hero of Darkness

CrimsonWolfAuthor

Liked by 26 people

Replies5

Grish99Lv5Grish99

sadly that the reality of buying chapters, in most novels there will be chapter where you pretty much paid for nothing. And I do agree putting bad review for one chapter thats is fixing plotholes is dum

Level1Goblin:I think you missed the part where he said he paid for the chapter only to not get a chapter of the actual story.

1yr

Jake122Lv15Jake122

he obviously learning and fixing things early helps stop to many plotholes later.

2yr

SpadeblackLv3Spadeblack

I feel like if he hadn't you would have complained that there were plot holes and yada yada. The author does a great job trying to bring us a story with extensive research and an interesting plot. Please don't base your entire review on one chapter.

1yr

Level1GoblinLv3Level1Goblin

I think you missed the part where he said he paid for the chapter only to not get a chapter of the actual story.

Spadeblack:I feel like if he hadn't you would have complained that there were plot holes and yada yada. The author does a great job trying to bring us a story with extensive research and an interesting plot. Please don't base your entire review on one chapter.

1yr

KhyaaLLv13KhyaaL

U still like the story right?

1yr