Review Detail of Ninth9 in Hero of Darkness

Item: Hero of Darkness
Rating: 4.8

Review detail

Ninth9Lv142yrNinth9

Solid story, good character development and i like the abilities. Better than most stories ive read from here so far. Only criticism would be the author notes sprinkled in time to time, breaks the flow of the story for me. Keep up the good story. [img=update][img=recommend]

Hero of Darkness

CrimsonWolfAuthor

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CrimsonWolfAuthorAuthorCrimsonWolfAuthor

Thanks for the review. And I've significantly reduced the notes to the point you'll barely see one in 10 chapters. Using a different approach to share references now. Hope to see you often.

2yr