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DrGrace
DrGraceLv142yr
2022-09-25 03:26

Oi oi oi oi Author San! I've heard you're dropping the novel!? This is a joke right? RIGHT!? This is an amazing novel and you have really great talent! You've fallen sick so many times, and i believe you should take breaks, I mean official breaks, l when you feel really tired, just go on a break. Like sometimes a week, and when you fall sick, then 15 days and whatnot. Take care of your health, both physical and mental, we all need breaks in our life.

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YourDad_
YourDad_Lv4

it's not about that The novel is not able to sustain the daily needs of the author due to piracy

DrGrace
DrGraceLv14

Machikayo?

YourDad_:it's not about that The novel is not able to sustain the daily needs of the author due to piracy
khadarcge_carte
khadarcge_carteLv1

hi I need you

Your_Daddy_9818
Your_Daddy_9818Lv4

Seriously , this is such a great novel

YourDad_:it's not about that The novel is not able to sustain the daily needs of the author due to piracy
YourDad_
YourDad_Lv4

Indeed it's one of my favorites

Your_Daddy_9818:Seriously , this is such a great novel
JustAnImmortal
JustAnImmortalLv3

Hello good sir. Please could you copy paste here what did the author write in the last chapter? I cant read the 685-686 chapters since I don't have privilege.

YourDad_:it's not about that The novel is not able to sustain the daily needs of the author due to piracy
YourDad_
YourDad_Lv4

This is the last line in chapter 686 [[THE END OF THE NOVEL. I'M DROPPING IT]]

JustAnImmortal:Hello good sir. Please could you copy paste here what did the author write in the last chapter? I cant read the 685-686 chapters since I don't have privilege.
DAMM_SCHOOL
DAMM_SCHOOLLv1

he is updating again..

YourDad_:This is the last line in chapter 686 [[THE END OF THE NOVEL. I'M DROPPING IT]]
YourDad_
YourDad_Lv4

what can I do if he goes back on his words?🤷🤷

DAMM_SCHOOL:he is updating again..
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