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Review Detail of Debojit_Debnath in Reincarnated As A Chameleon And Eating Everything to Evolve

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The mc is naive. And lacks the basic iq to even understand whatever explanation system gives sometimes. If you ignore the horrible iq of the mc, the story was doing quite well but then the author had to shove three kids down the readers throats who were already enjoying the hunt and growth of the mc. After the mc went to the village, nearly 10 chapters or maybe more was spent on useless shit. I just skipped those chaps. Instead of focusing on himself he spent days trying to make the kids practice. Lets not talk about the foolishness of letting the human army leave. And the scene where everyone dies and the mc is desperate.. seriously. I saw that coming miles away. And how the village chief and shoved three kids responsibilities down the mc throat because he had pride as a leader.. bullshit. So much garbage when it was just starting to feel fun reading as he grows. Such a disappointment. Complete disappointment. I know you want to give him a purpose or some shit. But he already had atwo purposes..to be free and strong.. these chapters of shit were not needed at all. And now he will carry three burdens with him (I already knew something like this will happen when he kept saying that he needs someone to talk to ).. I want to read further but these chapters just burned my eyes just like how the village was burned..

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Reincarnated As A Chameleon And Eating Everything to Evolve

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Sure. I hope you keep getting better. Suggestion- Having details on something non mc related is good. Using few chapters to expand the readers view or just introducing new things instead of the regular plot works well. But you have to keep in mind that we have come to read about the mc, so spending chapters upon chapters on describing something can backfire. Unless it is really interesting. I ll try to read again..hope it will be better

darran_:Thanks for the input and giving the book a try. I will keep that in mind when writing my next one. Hope to see you in my next book~!
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Thanks for the input and giving the book a try. I will keep that in mind when writing my next one. Hope to see you in my next book~!