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2022-01-22 20:22

Shameless Author Review here. So I think this is my best work in terms of grammar as I've already written two other books and learned from them. The beginning is a bit enraging so it might not be for some people. The MC isn't meant to be an all-powerful being, but a spider that pulls strings from behind to get what he wants (Though he still fights a lot). Also, I already said this in the first chapter, but this story does use historical events but is not completely historically accurate. These historical events do come later in the novel though, so don't expect them too early. Uhhhhhh... I think that's it. Anyway, please enjoy my novel!

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homeofthelostqueen
homeofthelostqueenLv2

is the MC a girl? because i loved your other female lead novels

Lazy_Chicken_God
Lazy_Chicken_GodLv13

Romance/Harem?

EsotericFox
EsotericFoxLv4

Is this series still on-going? I really enjoy it and in wondering if more chapter will be coming out? Good job Author!

Dretno
DretnoLv3

Please no harem, no romance. these ruin every good book I find.

andross
androssLv3

Will we get a cross over from the odin system novel, the poseidin system novel and this novel(my ares system).

_BLACK
_BLACKLv4

I know you will not answer but let's try you never know author there's harem ? yeah he will never answer ๐Ÿ˜‚

SayHelloToGrape999
SayHelloToGrape999Lv13

i smell a incel

Dretno:Please no harem, no romance. these ruin every good book I find.
Aaron_Aguilera_2568
Aaron_Aguilera_2568Lv1

Evil mc?

PonjuPonju
PonjuPonjuLv4

just curious, but seeing Warlock written in conjunction with gods such as Odin raises a question: The author does know that a Warlock is an Oathbreakers also known as a Blackheart or Blackguard in translated Norse and Old English? Warlock as a male witch was centuries after the fall of the Norse pantheon beliefs (mostly a new world thing, if I remember rightly). So... Really, the concept of a male witch (aka magic user) didn't become well-known until the horror film "Warlock" was released.

Big_Hank
Big_HankLv1

so you're reading the wrong books. Look at my three wifes beautiful vampires. Its good harem

Dretno:Please no harem, no romance. these ruin every good book I find.
Johnathon_Magus
Johnathon_MagusLv3

Ares sleept with multiple women and with Aphrodite. To not have a harem is strange just given the nature of Ares. Not that he had a harem but was never averse to having relations with multiple women. So despite being war oriented he had lustful attributes. Meaning the system could give MC perks in regards to his charm or whatever. Food for thought.

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