Great story! Characters are well developed and they all have relevance to the story. Not much world building as of yet but can see potential for it. The relationshios are intriguing no real dull moments. Only two improvements would be the grammer is a little off and some spelling mistakes but they can be easily figured out and the other being when there is a start of a new chapter it rehashes the previous one just in different wording for a good chunk of it. One thing I would like to know is if authour is going to continue this book?
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