Review Detail of FireBall540 in Unknowingly Cultivate a Experimental Cultivation technique

The stroy has potential. I like how you created it that he was turning into a girl due to the cultivation technique, but you should have drawn out the transformation through many chapters. While also making it where the main character doesn't realize what was goig on until much later in the story's development. Like maybe have it where the breasts don't become that substantial until later in cultivation.