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I don’t know why there’s so many complaints about errors. Web Novels are meant to be more or less rough drafts to begin with so there will be mistakes. That being said, I dropped this in Chapter 6 since I found the System-MC to be insufferably stupid and unnecessarily edgy. The most annoying part is the novel constantly calls the MC a mega-genius only for him to show no capability of complex thought moments later. Just saying a character is smart doesn’t make them smart…
I Became a System
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It's okay if you already dropped it. I already understood that people don't tend to find a missing piece. I mean, people want a direct explanation. In these 230 chapters, it will be explained why he was like that. I do know that he is stupid, and I made it like that for some plot that I expected to work, but sadly it didn't. Nevertheless, I put this work on hiatus because of the beginning chapters. People don't like it, and even if I try to say that it has slow progress, they won't get it. Take care!
yohananmikhael:It's okay if you already dropped it. I already understood that people don't tend to find a missing piece. I mean, people want a direct explanation. In these 230 chapters, it will be explained why he was like that. I do know that he is stupid, and I made it like that for some plot that I expected to work, but sadly it didn't. Nevertheless, I put this work on hiatus because of the beginning chapters. People don't like it, and even if I try to say that it has slow progress, they won't get it. Take care!
I will continue this after I settle some personal matter. I may even do a reboot with entirely different writing style, but same plot, since I was still amateur when I wrote this. Nevertheless, this book will just take a break until I finish other things.
Primal_silence:I feel your pain but will you continue this novel or is it dropped. By the this good