Review Detail of kw1n in I Became a System

Bad Grammar, not to the point of shty Chinese translators (which I would rather read), but nevertheless, bad in a way that doesn't make you choke, but endlessly annoy. The plot seems cool, great even - nice, but the fact that Aaron (The system itself is so... idk) The trope is good, but I think it has bad execution, especially the overly annoying dialogues involved. It makes it feel like, things that are tragic become comedic. The timelines at the start are a bit messed up too. Well, not really, but going back to the forth from past to present just strikes a nerve. I usually stick to, and bear to read even the trashiest of trash plots, but as of the moment, I can't bear this novel. (I can also smell our fellow ph genes)