Review Detail of DraconicBoi in I Became a System
Review detail
|| This review will only be limited to volume 2 as I will wait for volume 3 to continue reading. || Writing Quality [ 3 stars ]: Somehow, the amount of errors got worse in volume 2. It did improve around the middle of the volume but just enough to be on par with volume 1's quality. I hope the author could improve his writing because it is the only reason preventing me from calling it one of the best original story I have ever read. || Stability of Updates [ 4 stars ]: At the start of the volume, the release rate is a very consistent 2 chap/day. But in the later stages of the volume, it became highly unstable [ 1 chap/2 day -- 4 chap/day ]. It's fine with me since I pretty much binge read the entire volume anyways :) || Story Development [ 4 stars ]: I thought that the story by volume 1 is interesting but the author never ceases to amaze me as volume 2 brings the story to a whole new level. The few flaws in my opinion are: Ellena is finally getting her much needed time to stabilize her emotions, but she still acts nearly the same as she did before though. The few middle chapters when the time skips happened are especially boring to read. I felt this part could've been better. || Character Design [ 4 stars ]: The low rating is due to the poor description of the members of the 3rd generation group ( the author did state a reason for this ). In my opinion, introduced characters should always be related to the main story and therefore needed to be described better in order to increase the sense of immersion in the story. Because this lack of description, the scenes they are in became hard to imagine, making the chapter feel bland. The design for the other characters in the story is great though, I can't wait to see more. || World Background [ 4 stars ]: We're finally introduced to more of the world, though I feel the description for some of the places are a little bit lacking. || Extra opinion: I might've judged wrongly at some point as I'm very tired at the moment of writing this review due to online school. Anyways, the 'main' plot about demons have finally start to unfold. You should definitely try this story out. Again, I shall wait for volume 3 to complete before reading to avoid cliffhangers :v. || Total score: 3.8 stars
I Became a System
yohananmikhael
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your review helps me to know which part I should improve. it may be noticeable that the suggestions were not even seen in the work, especially in volume 2 where I was struggling with the styles in switching with 2 different perspectives. but I am planning on remastering it. nevertheless, it was a great learning experience.
Also, I forgot to mention this but I would prefer the side stories to be longer since that would make the part of the main plot that is related to the side story more real.
yohananmikhael:your review helps me to know which part I should improve. it may be noticeable that the suggestions were not even seen in the work, especially in volume 2 where I was struggling with the styles in switching with 2 different perspectives. but I am planning on remastering it. nevertheless, it was a great learning experience.
Great_Young_Master:Have you read Alien Evolution System? The author's vocab are unreal and the story is really good. Though, you might not like it as he would be considered an Evil MC.
I recommend reading it. It's really good. You can tell that the author has lots of experience in writing. It's not like Fanfics where the author doesn't have a lot of experience in writing and has to ask the readers question for the future of the plot.
DraconicBoi:I have it added but I haven't read it yet.
Great_Young_Master:I recommend reading it. It's really good. You can tell that the author has lots of experience in writing. It's not like Fanfics where the author doesn't have a lot of experience in writing and has to ask the readers question for the future of the plot.