Review Detail of DraconicBoi in I Became a System
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|| This review will only be limited to volume 1 as I will wait for volume 2 to continue reading. || Writing Quality [ 4 stars ]: It's good, but there are still a decent amount of grammar errors. || Stability of Updates [ 4 stars ]: The release rate is from 2 chapters/day to 1 chapter/2 days. It's quite unstable to be honest. || Story Development [ 5 stars ]: The story is interesting as of volume 1, the author did a great job at building the foundation for the main plot. Ellena's development is still too fast in my opinion as personality isn't something easy to fix, considering her past. Overall, the character development is not the best, but I've seen way worse. || Character Design [ 5 stars ]: It is good, but you can add a little extra detail ( like the point that is unique to that character ) to improve both the word count and sense of immersion in the story. || World Background [ 5 stars ]: Since I've just read volume 1, the world building only centered around 2 towns but it will improve later as this is still the early stages of the story. The world was built brilliantly by the author and the power of 'Ellena' actually went well along with the story || Extra opinion: You should absolutely try this story out. I'm sure it will not disappoint you. As for me, I have weak resistance against cliffhangers so I will read after every volume is completed. Total score: 4.6
I Became a System
yohananmikhael
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thank you very much. i kinda know the flaws so i'm practicing proofreading my written chapters and also the creation of characters i noticed it too, i still lack in the details. i emphasized that ellena kinda developed her personality by socializing because she lacks it but yeah, i agree that it was fast so i will add few more details in the future chapters while honing and fixing her personality that will be affected by the plot. and other characters too, i will pay on it. as for the stability of the updates, i started posting 2 chapters per day recently so i guess the volume 2 will end in a few weeks but there will be no rest for the next volume. and as for the past, i suck at it since i was trying to juggle 2 stories. thanks again for the review and this is also for others who might want to read this one.
yohananmikhael:thank you very much. i kinda know the flaws so i'm practicing proofreading my written chapters and also the creation of characters i noticed it too, i still lack in the details. i emphasized that ellena kinda developed her personality by socializing because she lacks it but yeah, i agree that it was fast so i will add few more details in the future chapters while honing and fixing her personality that will be affected by the plot. and other characters too, i will pay on it. as for the stability of the updates, i started posting 2 chapters per day recently so i guess the volume 2 will end in a few weeks but there will be no rest for the next volume. and as for the past, i suck at it since i was trying to juggle 2 stories. thanks again for the review and this is also for others who might want to read this one.
i applied a contract but if i got one, it will be perhaps at 3rd volume. idk but it will be announced so i wont lock chapters without notice. i plan to write 150 chaps before deciding to lock some chapters.
DraconicBoi:Also I have a question, will the story go premium anytime soon?
yohananmikhael:i applied a contract but if i got one, it will be perhaps at 3rd volume. idk but it will be announced so i wont lock chapters without notice. i plan to write 150 chaps before deciding to lock some chapters.