It is not best i have read, but it shows great creativity in the story line. I like the MC but i wish there a more defined way of showing her power (like a system or comparison of other characters) otherwise great story. Ps: For future story's i recommend using a storyboard to make it easier for you to keep the story on track. That is all from me, keep up the good work hope to read more from you in the future.
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