It's good. The translation isn't the best, but it's easy to read. The plot is funny and interesting and still has the one-piece vibe to it, with gags in serious moments.

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Though translation could use a bit of polishing, it doesn't really stain the great of a fanfic this is. It's totally a different take of character/attitude (specially luffy) and the indepth storyline in east blue, though its bad at depicting the environment (or they're just no interesting things/places on east blue). Btw please continue translating ;)

Well, of course I would write 5/5 review. But in reality, I know that the language is lacking. But in any case, it is totally worth reading.

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