Review Detail of Someone_Or_Other in Reincarnated as an Energy with a System
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Writing quality: excellent. I’m impressed by the author’s command of English. Updating stability: atrocious. The promise of 4 chapters per week is never - and I mean *never* - delivered upon. The author regularly goes a week or more between updates, sometimes to the point where I wonder if they dropped it or if I should. But I stick around anyway. Story development: slow, but good. The main character is immortal and unkillable, not to mention having a system that’s extremely, ridiculously overpowered, so all that’s left is basically slice of life. If you like slow-paced, casual adventures, you’ll really like this novel. Character design: meh. The MC is entirely too overpowered and side characters are regularly introduced then put on various buses and ignored. Even in the chapters they’re present, there’s little room for them to grow because the MC’s power level is so ridiculously high that they have little to offer, or even really to do at all. And the MC started out where most other MCs end, so there’s no real room for him to grow either. World background: incredible. The author has created many vibrant, living worlds, all of which feel like they could stand on their own as the backdrop for novels. I really have to applaud this aspect. Overall: the inconsistent release rate, the slow paced story, and the limited character development and ridiculous design kind of overshadow the author’s imaginative worlds. That leaves it rather mediocre overall, but I really have to emphasize that the worlds are incredible and the writing quality is superb. It’s just a shame that the author built such incredible backdrops for epic stories that never seem to play out and cardboard cutouts to play them.
Reincarnated as an Energy with a System
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He may have wanted to make amends, but he definitely panicked and had a mental breakdown which is not the last time it’ll happen
Someone_Or_Other:Would YOU want to sit there, completely incapable of doing anything under your own power for … basically forever? And as far as the “I’m not your god” thing, please keep this spoiler-free. But basically he felt guilty amd wanted to make amends. That makes him a decent person, not an idiot.
Why does this novel even have high reviews? Literally the worst novel I’ve had ever read. Even the new novels beginner authors makes is way better. Main characters is dumb dumb. Literally dumb. He chooses to buy the weakest spiritual root and the weakest body because he wants to “struggle”. His body is just a little better than a crippled person. Then he proceeds to scream “I AM NOT YOUR GOD” randomly, no reason whatsoever. He just made himself stuck in a corner and f*caked things up.
To be fair, he bought what he could afford at the time because he was sick of being what he was and wanted a body. Think of it like this: practically everyone wants a fancy sports car. But even if you can save up for one, it’ll take a very long time. So, since you can’t currently afford a lambo or whatever, wouldn’t you just buy some $500 jalopy off Craigslist to tide you over and get you to and from where you need to be while you save up for the lambo you really want?
Urmomiafire:Why does this novel even have high reviews? Literally the worst novel I’ve had ever read. Even the new novels beginner authors makes is way better. Main characters is dumb dumb. Literally dumb. He chooses to buy the weakest spiritual root and the weakest body because he wants to “struggle”. His body is just a little better than a crippled person. Then he proceeds to scream “I AM NOT YOUR GOD” randomly, no reason whatsoever. He just made himself stuck in a corner and f*caked things up.
Yeah that’s why he is a stupid idiot. He could farm energy while being in an energy mode. But nope, he bought the weakest and trashiest body and spiritual root and then proceeds to complain why he is weak. And suddenly he just snaps and shouts ”I AM NOT YOUR GOD”. 0IQ Moves, from start to finish.
Someone_Or_Other:To be fair, he bought what he could afford at the time because he was sick of being what he was and wanted a body. Think of it like this: practically everyone wants a fancy sports car. But even if you can save up for one, it’ll take a very long time. So, since you can’t currently afford a lambo or whatever, wouldn’t you just buy some $500 jalopy off Craigslist to tide you over and get you to and from where you need to be while you save up for the lambo you really want?
Would YOU want to sit there, completely incapable of doing anything under your own power for … basically forever? And as far as the “I’m not your god” thing, please keep this spoiler-free. But basically he felt guilty amd wanted to make amends. That makes him a decent person, not an idiot.
Urmomiafire:Yeah that’s why he is a stupid idiot. He could farm energy while being in an energy mode. But nope, he bought the weakest and trashiest body and spiritual root and then proceeds to complain why he is weak. And suddenly he just snaps and shouts ”I AM NOT YOUR GOD”. 0IQ Moves, from start to finish.
Who said forever?😂. He rushed for no reason whatsoever. He does not even think of the future. And who said he felt pity? He basically cornered himself and shouted for no reason? And spoilers? This happened early in the novel, very early. I doubt you haven’t read it.
Someone_Or_Other:Would YOU want to sit there, completely incapable of doing anything under your own power for … basically forever? And as far as the “I’m not your god” thing, please keep this spoiler-free. But basically he felt guilty amd wanted to make amends. That makes him a decent person, not an idiot.
Guilt isn’t pity. And yes, I read it, but this is a review, which means other people reading your comments here probably haven’t read it. So please stop spoiling it for them - just because you don’t like it doesn’t mean it’s right for you to spoil it for others.
Urmomiafire:Who said forever?😂. He rushed for no reason whatsoever. He does not even think of the future. And who said he felt pity? He basically cornered himself and shouted for no reason? And spoilers? This happened early in the novel, very early. I doubt you haven’t read it.