Review Detail of Boogada23456 in Quest Maker of Soul Land
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Just so you know I really love this novel it’s great but it has a really big flaw and it’s how you are writing the character build up for the mc it’s kinda like he isn’t even part of his own story due to the fact that you gave to many character personalities/references from abridged series like kirito from something witty entertainment and alucard and cell from team fourstar in a way it gave your mc multiple or shifting personalities that basically get rid or overshadow any character growth and this might be one of the reasons for your block??? Another thing is that even though the mc is building relationships he has no connection to the world/universe ( the closest thing he has to a home is his cabin in the forest.Your mc is a homeless rich man🤣)he is in kinda of feels like he’s holding a grudge to it??? Anyway you can ignore this mainly because I can’t put my finger on what is really off with this novel but hopefully trying to address these problems might help inspire some chapters
Quest Maker of Soul Land
FanHarem
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I finally remembered the second main flaw of the mc it’s that he is basically a mission driven machine that doesn’t stop to make the most profit.and making the fact that he has no true enemy or goal in his life in the end this character just exists moving aimlessly in both lives which is ironic considering his system.
FanHarem:thanks, I'll try and mull over the issues to see if I can make em. better
Boogada23456:I finally remembered the second main flaw of the mc it’s that he is basically a mission driven machine that doesn’t stop to make the most profit.and making the fact that he has no true enemy or goal in his life in the end this character just exists moving aimlessly in both lives which is ironic considering his system.