Right now, I am going to give a 3.6 stars. BUT that being said. With editing and a bit of tweaking, the story could be something fantastic! I see where you are going. A bit more of a backstory is needed for the main leads but I think you may have something. I will add your book to my library and check in more as you write. YOU got this! Being a writer is hard(I do it for a living) so keep up the good work! Talk soon!
Omahakhan
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