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DuruSharon
DuruSharonLv13yr
2021-07-18 09:12

I see potentials in this writer, I like the way she expresses the lead characters emotions clearly. I’d suggest you try it, it’s a must read. Bravo!

Laura’s love story

Duru_Sharon
4.9
17 Chs

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Samantha_R_Samuel
Samantha_R_SamuelLv2

So far it's a really good story, I am able to feel the distraught emotions of Laura. I think it's easy to connect with and that's a really good thing. It's an overall good storyline that has room for improvement and has a lot of potential too. I’d suggest you give it a try.

3yr

Marvelo_Chido
Marvelo_ChidoLv1

Laura is an amazing and determined young lady, there's a lot that could be done about fixing her parents marital crisis and asides from her talking to just her aunt she could suggest her parents see a guidance counsellor for therapist I think that could help the character achieve the peace she wants in her family. Nice one tho,it's more realistic and I like that it portrays everyday life.

3yr
Clara_Duru
Clara_DuruLv1

Good work 👍 Nice piece of information, you would go far. I really think that if laura's dad didn't go after men he would have kept the peace of his family. Because there's nothing like family's love and understanding it pushes one to do the in expected

3yr
NANCY_DANIEL
NANCY_DANIELLv1

An amazing piece ...looking to see the new things that will unfold in Laura’s life ,her encounters, the ups and downs of being in love You good girl....keep it up❤️

3yr
Cherechi
CherechiLv1

An intriguing storyline! Kept me glued to my phone till the end. I can't wait to see the outcome of Laura's new found life in Chicago. I hope she finds love and peace. Beautiful piece!

3yr
Yoan_Roturier
Yoan_RoturierLv2

So far so good. Honestly haven't read much because it's not my cup of tea but from what I've read it's heading the right direction. However, I'd suggest removing chapters 1 and 2. These are... a bit unnecessary in my opinion. Your synopsis can be found on the book's main page and the part about inkstone.... well readers don't really care about it.

3yr
jessica_nwoke
jessica_nwokeLv1

Such an amazing story! I know you will go very far with this story.. I was glued to my phone till the very end and wanting to know what will happen next. Keep up the good job, will be waifor the next parts

3yr
Cherechi
CherechiLv1

So far, everything about Mr. Andrea seems to resonate with Miss Laura. I'm curious to find out the outcome of their relationship. Will there be a turn of events or would there be a smooth ride between them? Keep it coming!🌹

3yr
Adwaid_Nambiar
Adwaid_NambiarLv1

I will wait and see how Laura's life goes on from here. The family dynamic helps define the character well and I feel that aspect of the story is well written. I like the overall storyline of the novel. The only complain I had was about the confusion of chapter numbers, like chapter 3 is the first chapter but seeing that I can understand one thing, this is the first novel by the author here so I don't really mind it. Other than that I feel story is very good and has potential.

3yr
Eshal_Shahnawaz
Eshal_ShahnawazLv2

Laura story is unique but potrays a sample of everyday life morals. She is a great character and easy to be attracted to. Great Job Author.[img=recommend]

3yr
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