Review Detail of McKinleyG16 in Thousand Pleasures Sect

nice smut chapter without too much happening at once seems like it could be a little more focused on the main character at the beginning and solely on the entrance exam but I find I wanted to read more so all in all good first chapter hope for more. try to work on punctuations a bit more some sentences seem like they kind of end prematurely or are cut off especially on the sentence when you first introduced the elder.