One of the best xianxia novels out there and the way his thoughts are portrayed is really good 😂 Nope this won't end anytime soon cause I almost threw my phone when I realized there were no more chapters

This novel is good and has a great potential the cultivation is refreshing considering it's very rare to have that dao realms mentioned. the writing quality is great although english is not my main language i can understand it easier than most of the fanfics in webnovel. As for the updates it would be good if you have schedules and make notices when the update will be delayed, i dont mean that im not satisfied by the current chapters as i just finished reading it now. For the story i think it would be good if does not change much of the arc or plot of the visited universes well i dont know for other readers it's just my wishful thinking. character design is great as it is. the world is the world haha Author-san: it's just my honest review so if you read this dont be offended cause it's rare to find fanfics to my liking if you think my review is okay just approve of it.

Mc so trash after he let his future wife get molested, he is op but lets a random moleste his girl, i still kept reading thinking author will make it better and i was hoping mc kill the dude or torture him but nope, Jiang Churan mother went to torture him and kill but his like nope spare him cuz his my disciple sworn brother. Mc is trash, delusional, and hypocrite

Trash. Letting your future wife be molested by some random thug so that you can be a hero. You should just cut your hands so that you cannot write anymore. Useless.

Latest(54) chapter disgusts me..Trash.. Drop[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

(Aw My review got deleted by webnovel ;() As much as I want to give this a 1 l won't be biased just because I hate what happened in the latest chapters. Writing Quality(5)- Really Good. Unless you go around reading every word twice you'll rarely find a mistake. Story Development (2)- Now this is very complicated. Consider this as a little spoiler but this would decide whether you read it or not. The Start was great and all but the arc with the mother Tang (m*lf) was too long but I didn't dislike it too much since I thought you wanted to flesh them out. Which could be considered good as long it's not too long. But The RanRan situation was F**ked.You played the whole situation out very poorly. I understood the motives behind it but the way you described it in detail in the next chapter after 'It's Time To Be A Hero'. You could just show she was struggling, not touched or the way you described then it wouldn't have been much of a problem even though it was concerning for the personality of the MC. Character Design(2)- MC- Hypocritical and disgusting. Letting your future girl be molested is only something the fans of (ne.torase) would enjoy. Even her mother didn't make it stop beside her weak attempts. What a tr*sh mother. I'm interested in what her reaction would be when she would find out that her lover (step-father) could stop all of it from happening and her mother was slightly involved in it too. That is if you don't turn her b r a i n d e a d. Updating Stability(5)- You seem to upload daily. World Background(5)- I Usually give this a 5 for fanfictions. Overall 3.8 but I won't be reading any further since the MC is not to my tastes. If anyone isn't bothered by the long arc and the whole RanRan situation then you can read this without any worries, Since a few people in the comments seem to be defending the author then there might be more out there that aren't bothered by it. Good Luck With The Fic.

Chapter 54 ruined this FF.... GJ author you made Mc more disgusting than he was.........................................................................

well another FF ruined by stupidity disgusting🤮 if this gets deleted then i know the reason!...............................................

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