Review Detail of Ztik21 in The last heir of Dumbledore

I like how the mc is trying to go his own way taking the lead in doing stuff. Just took a bit off because there's room for improvement basing on how I think the author is going for a slytherin version of the golden trio. Looking forward to more chapters and hope the author finishes the story. A bit of tip tho... For readers, if there's something that is not canonically accurate, do remember that you're reading a fanfic. So basically it is automatically an AU (Alternate Universe). For the author, no matter how good you do it, someone would still hate it so just try taking everything as a suggestion that you could use to improve your story or treat them as literally just comments about the work you're doing. You do you. Just try your best to make it at least kinda logical. You can pretty much do anything with the story, I just hope there's some explanations and weaving it naturally to your world. Looking forward on how you set up the stuff about voldy ^^v