It's just a rehash of the original story following exact same footsteps and nothing new even wishes seem useless and unneeded. That's just till ch 9 I'm not willing to try further.

well I haven't read it but I wont get my hopes up most fanfic where the mc takes over the body of the original mc dont do well because the author just copy and paste the original novel but change up certain things a example of this is that warlock of a magus world where the mc takes over Leylin Farlier body the only thing the author did was change up thing but other than that it's just a copy and paste fanfic I hope this is different

well, i had high hopes but seeing mc reincarnated as Yue Yang, my hope was shattered, its a pity, i couldnt see any interesting fanfic based on this novel

I have read 10 chapter it was just a copy no it more of a summary nothing new a shortened copy past a wast of time seriously i dont know after chapter 10

as of Chapter 125 MC pretty much has no change literally the same lines same attitude same decision making for the most part as the original besides being twice as strong and training his lackeys more The "conquer" targets are the pretty much the same The summons are pretty much the same The plot is paced quicker but skips a lot of small stuff just assuming you've read the original so you might feel like you're missing something by the next chapter I supporting fan fiction but it's honestly less than five percent change for the text that is there and 20% missing for the text that's just removed All at all it's not a bad read but to be honest... you might as well just go read the original and support the original author

I'm disappointed and my day is ruined. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I am reading this, as this is one of the rare LLS fanfic. Given the things overlooked or skimmed over in canon, LLS has plenty of potential for fanfics. Just following canon plot, but carrying out the events differently could be fun. Cultivating a few new beast alone could alter the events, without changing the final outcome thus keeping the plot close to canon. But, posting the canon plot, including dialogues, with minimal changes here and there doesn't a good fanfic make. In short:

THE BEST LLS [fan-fiction] I HAVE READ!!! The first dozen or so chapters followed very close to the canon..then there where some divergences.....But overall this is one of the better versions of this story...Do not expect it to leave the main story too much but the MC is at least better than the canon MC.

cheap copy, nothing new

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