Item: OMG I Became a System
Rating: 1
Author: SirZed

SirZedLv153yr

2021-06-21 16:05

God, I hate stories where the MC is turned into a system then the entire story is about literally babysitting some incompetent idiot. Why can't we get a system which works for itself and isnt a edge lord?

OMG I Became a System

PattyBu

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141 Chs

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PattyBuAuthor

Thank you for your feedback on the first. The system will, indeed, evolve. The story is a little slow, but it will get there in time. It's fine if you want to drop it. I have another novel : I become 7 Different Persons This one's plot might appeal to you. Thank you for taking the time to read this.

3yr

SirZedLv15

I appreciate it that you didn't start cussing as most would do. And I'll definitely check out your other novel.

PattyBu:Thank you for your feedback on the first. The system will, indeed, evolve. The story is a little slow, but it will get there in time. It's fine if you want to drop it. I have another novel : I become 7 Different Persons This one's plot might appeal to you. Thank you for taking the time to read this.

3yr

Jack_PriperLv6

what progress can we expect?

PattyBu:Thank you for your feedback on the first. The system will, indeed, evolve. The story is a little slow, but it will get there in time. It's fine if you want to drop it. I have another novel : I become 7 Different Persons This one's plot might appeal to you. Thank you for taking the time to read this.

3yr

AngelyDarkyLv14

Autor-san o mc vai ter um host um pouco mais inteligente e divertido? quero saber isso para ver se devo seguir ou não, afinal não gosto muito de hosts que são sonso, etc.

PattyBu:Thank you for your feedback on the first. The system will, indeed, evolve. The story is a little slow, but it will get there in time. It's fine if you want to drop it. I have another novel : I become 7 Different Persons This one's plot might appeal to you. Thank you for taking the time to read this.

3yr

Other Reviews

CyberBoyLv2

I do love system novels. MC is cute and confused at the same time. hope it more chapters. Keep posting more chapters . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

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MeemauLv1

The story is easy to read and I did enjoy reading it. story about system is a bit new concept for me. Well this not the most genre of novels that i read. but over all I can say the author is gooding his or her best of this work

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leoreview1Lv1

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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IZenusILv5

This story has such a good concept but is nigh unreadable. I tried to enjoy this but after 40 chapters it does not get better in fact there are chapters where it only gets worse.

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precursorLv15

Honestly I really like this novel it's unique and really fun to read but it struggles when it comes to writing now I will say it is definitely better in this than some stories I've read it does separate when each person is talking it has good sentence structure but while I'm not exactly sure it just seem that something is off with it. It just rather difficult for me to keep up with what's happening and it seems at times rather erratic like it doesn't really flow correctly if that makes any sense I can't tell if it's because of its vocabulary or not but I just find it rather difficult to read at times.

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DaoistiDvNuwLv1

so far i did enjoy it base on the plot of the novel. i like the system and host relationship in the novel need more improvements in the grammar. for the volume 1 a bit short but it was still fun to read.

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Patrick_Ian_Caja_5592Lv3

So I only read 20+ chapters so I cannot say if there will be improvement on this. Anyway the plot is interesting however it is kinda confusing I advise you Author-san to please recheck the names, and grammar before updating because It is a little bit hard for me to understand who is talking. Great work anyway.

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