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Review Detail of RedSonia in My Soul Tie

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RedSonia
RedSoniaLv152yrRedSonia

This story made me hold my breath. There is drama and mystery and the occult. My heart aches for Emma. She has so many issues, and I knew what will happen between Emma and Leo because of the summary, but I still wished that it happened differently. I mean... it was her first time, yet it turned out to be a big mess. Poor girl. Well, kudos to you, author, for making me feel for the girl. Writing quality is good and so is the flow, I didn't even notice how quickly I read chapter after chapter. 👍 --- The only improvement suggestion I have is that the first few chapters are a bit dry with a lot of background narration. It would have a bigger impact if you started the story with Emma getting a call from Ty, and whatever information was revealed before that call, to be sprinkled through the story.

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My Soul Tie

Biola Johnson

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RedSonia
RedSoniaLv15RedSonia

This is a review swap for "The Alpha's Bride" 😉

Biola_Johnson1207
Biola_Johnson1207Lv3Biola_Johnson1207

Got you dear, thanks.