Review Detail of strayed123 in The Ruined Death Knight
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It’s exceptionally bad up to chapter 50. The only thing I can say is that the author should give up on writing in English or hire an editor to rewrite the whole thing. You can’t read for more than 5 seconds before either being confused or having to translate what you just read in your head. Instead of relaxing and reading it feels like I am somehow working a full time job reading this.
The Ruined Death Knight
Allenheim
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Ya this is also true. There was pretty minimal character and world development up to where I got to. The only thing that exists to the reader is whatever is currently within 100 feet + maybe one other location.
HellGate:to tell you the truth for me the problem is not translation but the whole story because it was too fast and with low knowledge about magic and the system too because like talent when leveling up the skill ya know
true it was so late to introduce the magic intro because he was too strong and other character too around 300 before the magic basic knowledge introduced and the system and skill is so complicated and too much skill to tell you the truth I hate many skill getting because it was unnecessary and I hate fusing skill too I mean too much fusion skill. This is already complicated novel for me but I still read it quite sometimes when it released 20 chapters
strayed123:Ya this is also true. There was pretty minimal character and world development up to where I got to. The only thing that exists to the reader is whatever is currently within 100 feet + maybe one other location.