Review Detail of Hellifrit in Calamity is clumsy

Storywise, this book is not bad at all. The addition of Chinese actually made me like it a lot, not many adds Chinese in their book after all. Writing wise, from what I can tell the author is still figuring out the formating style of Inkstone so I can't blame them. However, paragraph breaking is not the best at all and makes me feel like reading a wall of text. Other than this complain, I don't have much to say. The story itself is almost like any other transmigration story, but I don't mind it since that's what it's trying to go for anyway. With that said, I'll say keep up the good work author.