Review Detail of kuhaku_sora in Torn Between Twin Brothers

The author has previous works that are very popular in the romance genre! I do not know how to make a hot and romantic plotline, so I will focus my review in an objective manner Writing Quality-4.5 (but i made it 5 overall. The descriptions are nice, but there are times that the scenes were "told" but not "shown" to the readers. Things like "he was upset" and other emotions are out there, which I think could be improved. Another point is that there are a lot of passive voice misuse such as "were scattered, began gathering, he was able to catch". The author could change these sentences into a more active one by making the word "was" into an active verb "scattered, gathered, caught" would be preferred. Stability of updates- The author has an uipdate schedule so 5/5 Story development- I like it. It seems solid and unique Character design- Very well made And world background 5/5 kudos for the author!