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Review Detail of NakedApron in White Lotus (Omegaverus)

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Huh, I never knew I wanted to see a dude get forced by his family into a gay marriage, but now that I've read it, I feel kinda enlightened. Quality: A few grammatical errors here and there, but overall it's not bad. Characters: So far so good. It's a bit hard for me to write anything more detailed here, but at least the MC looks hot. World background: The exposition was done in like 2 paragraphs, which was practically enough, as the concept is very easy to catch on. And the MC getting forced into a gay marriage by his family really pushed the idea forward. Story development: so far so good. <3

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White Lotus (Omegaverus)

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😂 you made my day. I am serious I wrote this novel to promote my other novel with same characters in different world setting but geez I actually forced my dear mc in marriage.