The only things that need working are, the grammar... DUDE pls use COMAS!. The second would be world background, try adding more explanations of the surroundings. MONSTER GIRL COLLECTION TITLE CARD IMAGES HERE!. CHECK OTHER RESPONSES: FIRST ONE!

the only reason to be an incubus is his looks because because he doesn't use racial powers at all because he's a nice guy, so what's the use of being an incubus if he fights in a totally different way with his fists? It is in the title is your career and is not relevant to the plot? And according to his race it is affecting him to make it more violent but he spends his time being cupid joining couples everywhere God is a high incubus they are lustful as well but in that it does not affect his race and he is cupid everywhere he goes

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would've been good if he wasn't being a matchmaker for a character i dont care about, is he the god of kindness and love or something? mc only got like 2 monster girls yet you made him start in that world like hes gonna be pokehunting. wish he was actually an incubus, mc should change his race to cupids spawn😐

I put 1 star. Gg does not use his incubus abilities. Acts like virgins. The author made gg an incubus to attract readers. Very disappointed with such stupidity.

grammar is bad english.. no punctuations, no separations. the sentence just keeps going whatever is convenient, whatever, heavy plot armor .

I hope the author reads this and knows that this is one of, if not the best fanfic I have read and really hope will start to get updated again.

I'm loving this fanfic. Unlike some people, it doesn't bother me that the MC reveals that he is a demon and is from another world. Why would it matter when the people of that world don't even pose a threat? My only problem, sometimes it even stresses me out, is that he uses a lot of "after all" in every paragraph. I'm not good at English, so I had to rely on the translator.

pretty good. I would like to see Demolus with zombie girl in monster masamune. keep up the great work author, your work is very entertaining. there are some text errors like weary(very) and such but it isn't a big deal so iits okay.