Pov: you used your brothers phone, opened his webnovel app and used his account just to review and use a power stone here. (now goodbye I hope he doesn't see this )

Here it is, the thing you call as shameless review from the author, where he gives himself 5 stars shamelessly, I will do the same. So, don’t mind me. It’s been 2 months since I started writing this novel, 2 seasons are already done. So, I think it’s about time I write review for you guys. Before starting let me clear one thing first. From season 2 to last episode, all the chapters have been edited and are perfectly fine. For Season 1, it’s getting edited, all the confusing POV are gone. Cuz only second chapter had POV confusion, I have already sorted it out and by the end of this month, all the chapters would be edited. So, let’s start. First, this novel is addicted, so don’t get drowned on it. If you did, I ain’t gonna come and save you. Second, the couples in this novel are too damn fluffy and crazy. If you think you can hold yourself back from reading about them. Then, I applause you. Third, each chapter will bring you a new adventure. So, don’t for a second think you will get bored. Fourth, read at least 20 chapters before deciding anything. Don’t get disgusted by first chapter, cuz every novel need cause and effect for the future. At least, my novel does. Once you have read 20 chapters, you won’t be able to leave, why? Because my Aiden is so crazy, that he will bind you to himself. Fifth, this novel is not for kids, it’s full of sex and smut. Only read if it’s your cup of tea. Sixth, this novel updates 2 chapters a day. And I am not gonna stop until this novel ends. So, you don’t need to worry about me leaving this novel in middle. Seventh, if you like this novel, then do support it by sending power stones, tags like, comment, gifts, reviews, etc. Eighth, English is not my first, second, third, or even forth language. So, if you find any mistake, do tell, I will correct them. Thank you.

First of all, we are here to learn and improve our skills and talents... it takes hard work, but is worth it. I keep my fingers crossed so that you, and people, who just start their journey with writing won't get discouraged. So... Don't worry so much about errors, we make them all, you can always correct them. From the very beginning of the story, the reader can feel that you have a concept for your book. The synopsis is intriguing. For me, a very conservative reader is annoying to see that you are jumping from one POV to another. The story would be a lovely one if you would write it in the 3 rd person's POV. Think abou it.

Story about 4 couples...who go through passionate love with steamy scenes....so if you look for this...you are on right place. The Mc Aiden has 10 different personalities, which behave funny but are reliable when it is needed.

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It's fast paced and the author updates regularly which is great for us readers. The male characters Aiden and Ethan are likeable and feels real. The writing could do with a bit more editing at times but aside from that it's a very interesting story! 👍

I will give my honest opinion. Your story is quite interesting so I will give constructive criticism as someone who is not good at English too, at the suggestion of some who helped me I started using the Grammarly app. Try using it to correct your mistakes too, it can improve the quality of your story. I hope the author continues to make an effort.

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