Review Detail of Omnitheus in Flowers, Crowns and love
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Review after 4 chapters Rating it with 5/5 This book has a creative way of exposition which would make the reader imagine the setting. Story pace seems to be just right. I didn't get the chance to read all the MC, as there should be 6, but the first MC design seems to maintain her character. It would be exciting to see her development. My only pointer is that when creating a chapter and starting with a particular character's point of view, only use the third person pronoun (she/he) for the person who owns the point of view. If the story needs to describe a different character, use an entire paragraph, perhaps with three sentences and include the name of the person being discussed with the third person pronoun. Overall, this has a good story. Good work!
Flowers, Crowns and love
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Saw your review to my work using your different account, dripping sarcasm. Even after the opportunities I saw in your work, I rated it with 5/5 since it's my first time reading it, giving benefit to its potentia, and gave you instructive pointers as agreed in the forums. My word is my bond. As for your review, seems like you marked at least three things dow, which generally is fine if that's what you felt, but I see you have a knack for doing that given your history of reviews. It disappoints that you not only gave such a generic two liner for the sake of giving a review, but you also didn't explain how you came up with the markdown you gave. But that's that. Good luck.