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Ok so firstly, l am so sorry author for this scathing review. The good points about this story are of course the humour and banter between the empress and the voice in her head. The characters are all well written and the author did a good job in that respect. The thing for me is the setting. If this is set in ancient China, then the way that the emperor acts is a bit too casual. Even the way that the transmigrated empress acts is too casual - if she was actually there, they would have thought she was an evil spirit. I would say that if the author wants to improve on the book more, it would be good to add some more realism to it. The other thing is calling Li Jing's father a cheat - in ancient china, people were allowed to have 3 wives and 4 concubines so the fact that he married his wife's sister wouldn't be seen as 'cheating'. But apart from this, l think the book is quite good with good humour! It definitely has potential!
Flowers, Crowns and love
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Oh no - l don’t mind - I was just trying to point out the fact that the imperial palace has rules and etiquette that people have to abide by - including the emperor
modestbaddie:Oh, thank you so much for the information. BTW, I did mention if it was in the 21st century. As a person from the 21st century, Li Jing is supposed to dislike the idea of one man having more than one woman. Of course, it's normal for the people of ancient times but to her, it's not. Her biological father is a cheater and her mother a homewrecker. It only adds to her disgust. Her mindset is different from ancient times people's. And about them behaving too casually, I don't plan on making my characters cold-like a hard rock. They might behave coldly sometimes but deep inside they are soft. Tbh, even if I try, writing a super cold MC isn't my cup of tea. I know that the story is set in ancient China but still I plan on making my story different. I am extremely sorry if you think that my reply is too harsh or something but I was just expressing my pov.
Oh, thank you so much for the information. BTW, I did mention if it was in the 21st century. As a person from the 21st century, Li Jing is supposed to dislike the idea of one man having more than one woman. Of course, it's normal for the people of ancient times but to her, it's not. Her biological father is a cheater and her mother a homewrecker. It only adds to her disgust. Her mindset is different from ancient times people's. And about them behaving too casually, I don't plan on making my characters cold-like a hard rock. They might behave coldly sometimes but deep inside they are soft. Tbh, even if I try, writing a super cold MC isn't my cup of tea. I know that the story is set in ancient China but still I plan on making my story different. I am extremely sorry if you think that my reply is too harsh or something but I was just expressing my pov.
Concubinebeauty:Oh no - l don’t mind - I was just trying to point out the fact that the imperial palace has rules and etiquette that people have to abide by - including the emperor