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J_WritingLv113yr
2021-06-19 02:33

First and foremost, I love the concept. The comedy relief that God gives is just excellent; I don't find it insulting at all and in fact I think that God would be somewhat laze faire. So great job there. I love the MCs sassy attitude and big heart, you give a lot of emphasis on self love and I think we need to see more of that in life. You give enough attention to descriptions that I can imagine most of it myself but you still steer the reader in the direction you want which I think is great; I love descriptive text. For critiques it's definitely grammar and sentence structure. I would also recommend Grammarly and even writing in google docs before posting. That way you can do an edit check; but don't be too harsh on yourself because it's hard to edit. I noticed that you said you live in Asia and I think your writing for English when it's not your first language (I'm assuming and if I'm wrong I'm so sorry) is actually very good! With more practice, peer reviews and writing I think you'll have our ridiculous language down. (I am from America and even I don't get my language right all the time). All in all you have done a wonderful job and I want to see more. I have added this to my library and can't wait top see where this goes. I am happy to do a peer review with you any time!

Flowers, Crowns and love

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Thank you so much! Your comment really lighten up my mood. I love it. (^з^)-☆Chu!!

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"I am the one I should love in this world " 💜 Shameless but beautiful author here ✧(｡•̀ᴗ-)✧ giving her own work 5star ≧﹏≦ Maybe you will find grammatical or spelling mistake here and there but feel free to correct them. Correction with care is acceptable but I won't be taking any hate from anyone. Show love, support and care. Love you all (^з^)-☆Chu!! PS : stream BTS songs for a better life 💜

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The author giving the 2nd review: It wasn't my intention but I just couldn't help. The same old thing: grammar needs to improve. If you had read with focus then you would know that the book is now improved. I used Grammarly and changed the majority of things. Yes, a few grammatical errors still are here but not enough that most of you are mentioning it again and again!! I am a human whose first language isn't English. Cut me some slack!! PS: I am sorry if I sound rude but it's frustrating, to be honest. purple you all and love yourself 💜~~

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