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2021-08-27 19:30

I don't feel like I'm ready a story. I feel like I'm reading a summary. It's like someone took 400 chapters and compiled it into 40. By the end of ch. 40 the FL have already defeated the evil step mother, found her biological parents, founded her own company, and is getting married with the ML. Seriously what else is left??

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I was honestly at first super excited for this. I have been waiting for this book to be translated only for my expectations to pop. first of all, I honestly love how it started, I get the fact that the Sue from another world possessed the body of another Sue from a different world and I am totally good with that. I like the idea of having a strong and independent FL. I was also high-key good with the fact that she confronted her adapted parents head on, since the start of the book. like I am fine with that. I also have total respect for the ML for being such a gentleman although he low-key seemed like a playboy. I am satisfied. but, the thing is, it went too fast. it's like giving you a 20 question test and only giving you 5 minutes to finish it. it was so fast that it totally went like a blur. it's like the author doesn't want the FL to experience some setbacks because it does seem to me. like I don't even know how she was able to have a company and a house when she was as the synopsis says is labeled as 'incompetent'. will an incompetent person be able to start a company so fast. and if the FL was indeed the one who build the company from the moment she transmigrated, don't the author give us some buffer? like show us how she was able to do it. it's not like you're learning a recipe and you straight head on show us the final result. it was too unrealistic. I know that the book was unrealistic in the first place, but I don't want even the process to be so unreal. I stopped reading the book before chapter 10 or maybe much lower. I would probably continue reading this some other time when the chapters have already accumulated. I might change my mind and write another review but these are my thoughts for now.

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