Review Detail of Brandongould in The Legendary Systems Engineer

Hello this is brandon gould this is my review of your book The story was very interesting and well written, the world and charters are described will and i get a sense of what the rules of the universe are That being said as i was reading i kept thinking besides the black hole Why does he need to fix the universe, where is the conflict will progress the story motioving the MC to action ? A suggestion would be and you might be hinting at it, that the UVS is not what they seem to be and Master Isuh who i like and would want more devlompt from has a altertive motive but beside that it is a very interesting story and i hope you win the contest